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Nightclub Commission Finished

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The final for a commission that might lead to a steady comic book gig.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

hello! interesting artwork.
- i like the way you worked with the clothes and its wrinkles. it´s always a hard work to do.
- the girl on the right looks beautiful and charming for me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> and i like the interaction between her and her partner.

but there are some issues which disturb me.
- in spite of the fact that the girl on yellow seems really to be more... uh... easy going and shameless; her dress seems to show so much that she may look more like a whore.
- the man on the left side has a strange pose with his free hand/arm, i don´t know what he´s doing like that...
- the expression of every person in this artwork is practically the same. it turns the work a bit tedious and artificial, not something natural and believable. everybody is smiling the same way.
- what they are doing? posing for a picture? for me it´s lacking something to know what they are doing there. what´s happening? they are waiting for someone? they are preparing to dance? and there´s no interaction among the couples, in spite there are four people there. (well, maybe the men are looking at the girl of the other couple, eheh, but it´s could be just a joke.)
- the front leg of the girl on yellow seems to have a issue on anatomy, near to the foot, isn´t it? maybe too thin?

anyway, it´s always a challenge to create something like that, congrats to you. it´s a bit complex, with four figures. i wonder if you used any references, or imagined everything. and if you could add a real background here (this could actually show the nightclub itself).